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| PleasureBonBon Forum -> PleasureBonBon.com Personal Stuff ~ "The Shadow of a Fox" comments topic |
| Who is your favorite character? (Image links are located in my post) |
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| Ordo |
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25% |
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| KrystalBlaze |
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| Felecia |
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25% |
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| Arctic (doesn't appear in story until chapter 7) |
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25% |
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| Other (please comment) |
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Sun Feb 26, 2012 2:35 pm
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This is for all of the feedback, comments, and questions reguarding my story.  |
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Sun Feb 26, 2012 2:40 pm
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Since I couldn't get the links to work in the poll I'll put them here. Sorry.
ShadowFox image
Ordo image
KrystalBlaze image
Felecia image
Arctic image |
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| I also now have the drafts for Arctic and Ordo so hopefully soon I'll be able to add links for both of them as well. |
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Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:57 pm
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| Wow, really nice artwork. I can't decide who to like more. |
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:03 pm
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I can't take credit for the artwork. These were done as part of an ongoing mass commission that the talented Arctic-Sekai has agreed to do. Months ago I was desperately looking for an artist to undertake the daunting task of working with me to bring these characters to life. I was having a hard time doing it myself because they were constantly changing in my head so I decided to suck it up and go on the hunt for a good artist. After being taken for a ride by a few different artists I finally found Arctic-Sekai and she agreed to take the impossible job. And damn did I luck out because she has done an absolutely amazing job so far.
So please if you like them let her know on her DA and/or FA page. |
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Sun Mar 18, 2012 9:54 am
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I'm sorry but Arctic hasn't posted the Ordo or Arctic pics for me to put a link on them. So instead I have made a new note on my Facebook page with each of them.
http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=552881957&ref=profile#!/notes/joshua-conley/and-the-team-is-complete/10150667251857716
(I don't know how well this link is going to work so please let me know)
Edit: Ok so it doesn't work like I wanted it to. But there is a way to get it to work:
1) Coppy the entire link into your url
2) friend me (I guess :/ I tried to make the note public but oh well) |
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Wed Jan 30, 2013 1:16 pm
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I have new updates for each of the characters now!! 
Christopher "ShadowFox" Conley:
In Civ. clothes
His Recon Armor
His "All-purpose" Armor
His Heavy Armor
Marie "KrystalBlaze" Feeney
In Civ clothes
In her only armor
Jake "Ordo" Smith
In Civ clothes
His Recon Armor
His "All-purpose" Armor
His Heavy armor
And Arctic Ikumè
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Wed Jan 30, 2013 1:19 pm
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Also I have a dilemma!
Sadly I have found out that in 1994 there was a book already titled "The Shadow of a Fox" 
I need help coming up with a new title!!! Please |
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((Hey Shadow,
Well... on a sidenote, I finally saw a Pittsburgh Penguin... and they were awful >_< You'd think they'd not have known how to skate! And to New York... NEW YORK!!! But, anyway.
So... a new story title? Um... what sort of story are you trying to write? Given the three soldiers and one extra, but the overall serious look to everyone, I'm assuming it isn't a comedy-buddy-action genre, but more something like... Tom Clancy would write.
Anyway, iffn you can supply that, without ruining the story, I might be able to give you some ideas as to a title.
Without that, and based completely on the art... I'd suggest the following:
"Bounty Hunters" )) |
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Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:32 pm
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| Tearlach wrote: |
" Vulpine," "Kitsune"
The shade of a Fox
In the Fox's shade
Waiter, there is a fox in my soup!   
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I think that last one shows some promise. I'll keep bouncing the ideas around in my head.
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((Hey Shadow,
Well... on a sidenote, I finally saw a Pittsburgh Penguin... and they were awful >_< You'd think they'd not have known how to skate! And to New York... NEW YORK!!! But, anyway.
So... a new story title? Um... what sort of story are you trying to write? Given the three soldiers and one extra, but the overall serious look to everyone, I'm assuming it isn't a comedy-buddy-action genre, but more something like... Tom Clancy would write.
Anyway, iffn you can supply that, without ruining the story, I might be able to give you some ideas as to a title.
Without that, and based completely on the art... I'd suggest the following:
"Bounty Hunters" ))
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So you're the reason they lost. because the won both games prior and the next five in a row (including their remach with the Islanders) 
And yes it is a bit more in the line of a Tom Clancy type of story. but I don't really know how to sum it up because it constantly changes as I write it and the ending (the only solid part of the story in my head) is where it all comes together and if I said that it would just ruin it all.  |
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Well I guess I could try to get this back up and running again. I'm actually trying to work past some epic writer's block and it's been killing me and my last two chapters have really suffered because of it. But as of now I'm working on chapter 13 and have about 56,000 words.
The thought occurred to me that it might be getting too long. |
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