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    | General Forum -> General Discussions  ~  The Nostalgia Smiler - Scruffy Review | 
  
  
  
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            Fri Feb 08, 2013 7:46 am 
            
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            Fri Feb 08, 2013 2:54 pm 
            
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| Just got finished watching it. I have to say, it was'nt a bad review. Though I have to ask, why the Nostalgia Smiler? |  
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            Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:05 pm 
            
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| Fair enough, there were some parts that made me laugh when you ranted on. It only seemed nitpicky, but thats part of being a reviewer. |  
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            Sun Feb 10, 2013 9:18 am 
            
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((Hey Ricardo,
 
 
Okay, so I watched/listened to your review, and I have a couple of quick thoughts.  These are just my opinions, so add three dollars to them, and you can buy a cup of coffee.
 
 
1)  You need to get a better microphone.  The one you have gives off a noticeable "hiss", and well as "chop" sounds.  In order to reduce that you might need a studio quality microphone.  The ones you get for gaming tend not to worry about that sound.
 
 
2) Your voice inflection seems a lot like Robin Leach from "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous".  Not sure if you intended that or not.
 
 
3) Not sure if it is a British-critique thing, but your timing of "hate-to-love" sorts of switching was more... distracting, than poignant or darkly humorous.  On the level of 'whiney-emo-bitch' distracting.  I understand the need to vacillate between the two, ala Lewis Black, but your delivery on it needs work.
 
 
So, for what it's worth, I hope that helps some. )) |  
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            Sun Feb 10, 2013 9:22 am 
            
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	  ((Hey Ricardo,
 
 
Okay, so I watched/listened to your review, and I have a couple of quick thoughts.  These are just my opinions, so add three dollars to them, and you can buy a cup of coffee.
 
 
1)  You need to get a better microphone.  The one you have gives off a noticeable "hiss", and well as "chop" sounds.  In order to reduce that you might need a studio quality microphone.  The ones you get for gaming tend not to worry about that sound.
 
 
2) Your voice inflection seems a lot like Robin Leach from "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous".  Not sure if you intended that or not.
 
 
3) Not sure if it is a British-critique thing, but your timing of "hate-to-love" sorts of switching was more... distracting, than poignant or darkly humorous.  On the level of 'whiney-emo-bitch' distracting.  I understand the need to vacillate between the two, ala Lewis Black, but your delivery on it needs work.
 
 
So, for what it's worth, I hope that helps some. ))
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Thanks for the advise, I'm sure to try and use it in future. |  
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