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| PleasureBonBon Forum -> PleasureBonBon.com Discussions ~ Update on story and more... |
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Thu Jan 24, 2008 4:21 pm
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I'm glad to see people are looking at my story. The next chapter may or may not take a while. Depends if I can get my head on straight and stop juggling the many ideas in my head. That and I'm not going to post until I come up with a title for my story, starting to get annoying calling it Chapter 1, 2, 3, and 4...yet I'm still stuck on what to call it  I'm open to suggestions, as long as its not "The adventures of..." type title. That one is used a little to much.
Anyway I hope you all like the name I gave to the constable, seeing as he needed one. Just to clear things up he's a 53 year old otter that once served in the British Army for over fifteen years before becoming an London police officer. After his wife was killed by a mugger he left England and came to BonBon to find his son. After a bit he decided to become an officer again seeing as BonBon was peaceful, though right now its not. The rest I'll leave up to your imagination, might do a back story on James Norton and his time in the Army to when he became the constable of BonBon. Course depends on what you all think.
Umm yeah that about sums it up. So I'll try to think of a title, get the next chapter up ASAP and think on the back story for Norton. And thats about it. Send some feed back about what you guys would like to see in my story, I'm always open for new ideas. |
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Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:08 pm
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| How about "Secrets in a Small Town"? |
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Wed Feb 06, 2008 2:13 pm
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| Hmm I kind of like that. Even though BonBon is a resort town every place, small village to a large city, has a secret. I think I'll stick with that one, thanks Xebulon. Still stuck on the layout of the next chapter, have way to many ideas for this one and I don't know how to form it. I'll post as soon as I can. |
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Wed Feb 06, 2008 5:18 pm
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Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:24 pm
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Sometimes simple suggestions sound sincerely satisfying. 
In case you hadn't noticed, I like alliteration. |
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