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| PleasureBonBon Forum -> PleasureBonBon.com Personal Stuff ~ Bad Endings, Good Beginnings! |
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Mon Jan 18, 2010 1:42 pm
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HELLO!
Man, I can finally post again and its been so long!
How is everyone doing?!
I know I haven't being very active here but either way I would be happy to hear how everyone is doing this days!
Here's a poem just because I feel a little bit happy!
Here is it comes:
Joy Be Awaken
By A. Briano C.
I fell in a land far far away hidden in the darkness of my soul
in which I was trapped and felt lonely for no reason,
but as time past the chains of desolation broke
and my heart was reborn full of joy with a new vision.
I grew more joyful and full of life
while friends and family all showed me a loving happiness,
I couldn't be happier I couldn't be sad
and I hoped for this feeling to fill all the emptiness.
I jumped and sang and sang and jumped
the joy was filling me to the very top,
I can't describe what I was feeling
and I knew I didn't want to give it a stop!
My heart beating and my body feeling
I was reborn from a darkened void of sorrow,
to come out of I had just done
while always looking up to a better tomorrow.
And here I am speaking to everyone
expressing my feelings to the world I live in,
keeping the passion that was hidden
and so I have brought back to once more begin.
Singing songs is what I like the best
while everyone listens I sing aloud,
my voice flies and extends far away
while reaching the very end of the listening crowd.
My desire is for everyone to be filled with joy
dancing and singing purely out of their hearts,
I will never deny my passion
for it will never die the beautiful sound of my arts...  |
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Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:10 pm
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| I hope someone at least reads this poem and tells me what he or she thinks about it. The life of a forsaken soul! |
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Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:17 pm
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| Seems like a very well thought out poem. |
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Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:24 pm
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I hope I don't sound so desperate but, thank god someone said something about my poem. After writing many of them one kind of gets a feeling close to the one that everyone feels when they have accomplished something good. Sorry, I don't mind if I'm called pitiful so don't feel shy to reply to this comment.  |
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