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Rank: Veteran Joined: 10 Jun 2009 Posts: 803

Working on Jerin's story. Figured I'd make this thread first so i can talk to people about what they think, and plan out the story. Speaking of which I need to talk to Cassandre, Shadow_Twisted, and Kommy about something on the main plot line.

The story is here http://forums.pleasurebonbon.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7757

Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Posts: 1462

Well, you just gotta get the right type of distraction to get them over here. *Holds up a sign that says "Booze and Hookers"*

Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 31 Jul 2008 Posts: 1578

I see no booze or hookers.. Sad

False advertising! Evil or Very Mad

I would give you some feedback, Jerin, but unfortunately I don't read anyone's stories at the moment - too busy.

Rank: Veteran Joined: 10 Jun 2009 Posts: 803

yeah and actually while this is futher up here. Cna i ask people in general who's fursonas i have permission to use?

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Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 31 Jul 2008 Posts: 1578

Hmm. Where's it set? It might be that Tadelesh was never anywhere near there, so even suggesting to use him would be silly.

Rank: Veteran Joined: 10 Jun 2009 Posts: 803

the main story line is in bonbon about a month after his arrival. The flashbacks vary from Northwest America to Australia.

Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 31 Jul 2008 Posts: 1578

Well, perhaps in BonBon. Tadelesh has never visited America or Australia.

Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Posts: 1462

What would you need our characters for? Just appearences, interactions, or are you thinking naughty thoughts? Razz

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Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 27 Jul 2005 Posts: 2568

I'll partake in the flashback, but I'd like to be carrying a potted plant that, as each flashback gets closer and closer to the present day, the plant I'm carrying slowly grows to a full out tree in the present time. Laughing

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Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 27 Jul 2005 Posts: 2568

*shrugs* Lets go with Australia. You know, I was actually born there. ^_^

Rank: Veteran Joined: 10 Jun 2009 Posts: 803

ok any time in particular? those are going to be happening about in the past 4 years about

Rank: Veteran Joined: 10 Jun 2009 Posts: 803

Hey Ewan is it okay if i use the Golden glass? and if i can what time does it open in the morning?

Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 31 May 2009 Posts: 1214

You have my permission to use CLR for anything, just seeing, interaction, or naughty bits. Remember though, that she has just escapedan insane asylum and is searching for hre estranged husband. speaking of which, I must edit my background.

What is it that you need to speak with me about? oh, and by the wya, if we interact, make it because you have information, and if we interact naughtily, I like to dominate. But, I can be submissive. And I'm super insane right then.

Just to let you know.

What is it you wanted to speak about?

Rank: Veteran Joined: 10 Jun 2009 Posts: 803

I'll keep that in mind whe i need to get the lime build-up off my shower wall. whistling

Anyway, idea i was thinking about. namely some "out of town" talent being hired to deal with Samuel and CLR. talen being some "old friends" of jerin as it were

Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 31 May 2009 Posts: 1214

mmkay, I understood virtually nothing in that statement.

And I see you've adopted the way I call her CLR.

Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 08 Jul 2006 Posts: 2311

It was a pun, Cassandre... your initials (Cassandre La Rue) are also the brand name of a farily well-known cleaning solution here in the states... Calcium, Lime, and Rust remover, thus the name CLR

Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 31 May 2009 Posts: 1214

Dammit. From now on I'm callling her ClR

Rank: Veteran Joined: 10 Jun 2009 Posts: 803

yeah

ok to clarify what i said, i'm thinking some bushwhackers from australia with a grudge against Jerin got hired to take out CLR and Samuel.

Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 31 May 2009 Posts: 1214

Hm. Okay. They could be friends of victims, or maybe friends of contacts that had to be killed. Once they knew too much, they wer killed.

Or, they could be relations to Pierre. Nasty, rotton, fucking, ass-hole...
Hehe, sometimes I can hate my characters sooo much I want to kill them. Which is good becuase he ends up with his blood staining the walls of his new home red. His intestines are wreathed on the door, and his penis- You don't want to know I assume.

Rank: Veteran Joined: 10 Jun 2009 Posts: 803

Yeah one of them is the brother to a guy Jerin killed, I could work out the other two as having lost relatives who were traveling.

Rank: Veteran Joined: 10 Jun 2009 Posts: 803

ok finally getting to where i'm working on this again. should be posting another entry in a week or two depending. I've reworked the plot a little, in part due to some people disappearing, and partly because my initial idea didn't quite blend into the town right. Still looking for permissions, though i need to talk a few people about certain plot points, namely Kommy, Constance, Caroline, Samuel, and Jess. No particular rush since i shouldn't be getting to anything involving you for a bit.