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"well my name is andrew wolf" he hear dorian say this is jane scarlett "nice to meet you jane can yo utell me anything about yourself"

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Jane smiled as Dorian took a seat.

There's not that much about me that's all that interesting. Sure I was a mercenary, but other than that and a far more... well.... interesting background.

Jane said sipping her coffee. while putting her left leg over her right and leaning back in her chair.

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Good so far,

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Andrew asked someone who was there for a glass of tea. he got some sugar and mixed it in there two spoons of sugar in his tea. he enjoyed sweet tea. "well so basically just a mercenary" "nothing about me I'm just a singer/songwriter and my Friends my singer in my band"

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If you are talking, put a comma instead of

"Hey" "So how are you"
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"That's right, not to mention I lived in Louisiana once, and then made my way to Chicago."

She said happily.

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"oh so your from the south im from kentucky" he start to talk "see ive been i n alot of places in america that shaped my suical style and i met my friend in america" "ironically hes from birmigham england"

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"Oh that's neat... Dorian aren't you from Birmingham."

She asked with a wondering look on her face. Dorian looked up shaking his head.

No, no I'm from London.

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"well i learned something about yo Dorian today" "i was wondering which part your from in england.
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one thing i picked Jessie to be from Birmingham to make sense séance hes an Ozzy parody. because hes from Birmingham

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wel lforget about hishi. ok io work on it.
andrew walkign threw a forest. sees trees and how the moonlight reflects off the trees. walks and the path is great. he sees the house its not to old the only word to describe is rustic. its brown with a black top. there is no knocker but there a eyelet on the door so they can see who is outside. he just knocks on the door.