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PleasureBonBon Forum -> PleasureBonBon.com Discussions ~ Opinions asked about 'Illussions' |
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:45 am
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I find myself rather stuck lately by this comic, and I have the thought and desire to ask Vanessa and Ronald to remove it, so I can renew it with a better story (and better art)
Don't say you like my art, I know. And thank you
It just when i compare my art of two years ago towards now, I go like... AAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!
And I feel like I should do something that would involve the members aswel.
I also had help in one page of someone since I got into an artblock that time. and I really feel like: this should be my work only. No edits, no fixings. No help.
So, this why I start this thread and please no Roll Playing on this one to ask opinions idea's and hopes you had for this comic, so i can note this.
I want to write this topic now for months but still, I finally bit it through and I rather ask now ya'll with: What should I do...
Please keep it serious for once. |
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:02 am
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:19 am
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I agree, it's up to you what to do with your artwork, but I also like to see how an artist progresses and this sounds like a good way to see how you have, if you leave the work you've already shared up. I think your work is some of the most beautiful I've ever seen, I've always said so, and I would hate to see any of your work just disappear, no matter how different it is from what you can do now. |
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:23 am
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 5:22 am
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aw. i really like the comic so far, was looking forward to reading more. but if you want to take it down and re-do it... that's your prerogative, i'm sure the re-done version would be just as good... at least i hope it would be anyway, i dare say, though short, it is sitting on top of my list of fav PBB comics.
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:28 pm
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I know but still, i think this story plot of mine is very weak too, i think i grew more 'adult' in the past few years when it comes to story's... *looks at herself in the mirror in pet version* or perhaps not...
ahum, no, i just want something ... that's better |
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:30 pm
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-runs off to save what's there before it disappears-
for uh... archiving... you know, historical purposes... |
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:08 pm
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What about finishing it and starting another one? Perhaps do like Randy and have 2 comics going at once? I don't see why you should rip one up. Your art has improved, that's alright.
Without meaning offense to Vanessa, you can see from the first issue to the latest comic that Vanessa's style has improved greatly. |
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Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:18 pm
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Mystic wrote: |
What about finishing it and starting another one? Perhaps do like Randy and have 2 comics going at once? I don't see why you should rip one up. Your art has improved, that's alright.
Without meaning offense to Vanessa, you can see from the first issue to the latest comic that Vanessa's style has improved greatly.
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yeah, Vanessa rather wants me to finish this one first before doing another story ^^;;; |
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:59 pm
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Well,what you could do is see how to "gradually" put changes into the existing story until it becomes something you are satisfied with.They can be very small changes like a new character or a slight adding to the plot.Personally,I like what you have done so far,but being ar write I have often felt less than happy with my earlier work(since one grows over time with added experience). |
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Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:46 am
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Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:20 pm
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goddess-ofthe-night wrote: |
yeah, Vanessa rather wants me to finish this one first before doing another story ^^;;;
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Well, what left would you do for this comic? Looks like the two were about to get physical, yes? So slap in some hot gal on gal scenes to get the men's attention, then add a "to be continued" after 10 pages of such action.  |
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Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:20 am
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LabrnMystic wrote: |
goddess-ofthe-night wrote: |
yeah, Vanessa rather wants me to finish this one first before doing another story ^^;;;
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Well, what left would you do for this comic? Looks like the two were about to get physical, yes? So slap in some hot gal on gal scenes to get the men's attention, then add a "to be continued" after 10 pages of such action.
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now, that might be a good idea XP
keep up the good work =) |
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Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:40 am
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Do what you feel comfortable with, to end the comic. I'm sure you will find out something really nice ^_^ |
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Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:35 am
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henkcobra wrote: |
I saw your picture in the comic about zone.
You look so lovely, atractive and sexy.
Can I ask you to go out with me in a rp?
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I don't RP i'm afraid ^^;;
No seriously XD
As for Labrn and Mlock
10 pages of lust? L O L Like I said GotN plays with girls but doesn't go far, but MAAAAAAAAAAAAYBE i'll make an exeption :p
or N O T
I don't know, i'm still thinking' |
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