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goddess-ofthe-night
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:45 am  Reply with quote
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I find myself rather stuck lately by this comic, and I have the thought and desire to ask Vanessa and Ronald to remove it, so I can renew it with a better story (and better art)

Don't say you like my art, I know. And thank you
It just when i compare my art of two years ago towards now, I go like...
AAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!


And I feel like I should do something that would involve the members aswel.
I also had help in one page of someone since I got into an artblock that time. and I really feel like: this should be my work only. No edits, no fixings. No help.


So, this why I start this thread and please no Roll Playing on this one to ask opinions idea's and hopes you had for this comic, so i can note this.

I want to write this topic now for months but still, I finally bit it through and I rather ask now ya'll with: What should I do...

Please keep it serious for once.

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Aaron_Thom
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:02 am  Reply with quote
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Well its up to you really. Personally I like looking at how artists have progressed with their art. I like the look of your comic but if you wanted to take it down and put something newer up then I have no problem with that either.

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Ashton Gray
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:19 am  Reply with quote
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I agree, it's up to you what to do with your artwork, but I also like to see how an artist progresses and this sounds like a good way to see how you have, if you leave the work you've already shared up. I think your work is some of the most beautiful I've ever seen, I've always said so, and I would hate to see any of your work just disappear, no matter how different it is from what you can do now.

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dragonfly
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:23 am  Reply with quote
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i agree completely with aaron and ashton but its all up to u if u want to remove it and add a new piece.

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Silvador
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 5:22 am  Reply with quote
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aw. i really like the comic so far, was looking forward to reading more. but if you want to take it down and re-do it... that's your prerogative, i'm sure the re-done version would be just as good... at least i hope it would be anyway, i dare say, though short, it is sitting on top of my list of fav PBB comics.

<- me sad

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goddess-ofthe-night
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:28 pm  Reply with quote
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I know but still, i think this story plot of mine is very weak too, i think i grew more 'adult' in the past few years when it comes to story's... *looks at herself in the mirror in pet version* or perhaps not...

ahum, no, i just want something ... that's better

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Silvador
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:30 pm  Reply with quote
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-runs off to save what's there before it disappears-
for uh... archiving... you know, historical purposes...

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Mystic
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:08 pm  Reply with quote
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What about finishing it and starting another one? Perhaps do like Randy and have 2 comics going at once? I don't see why you should rip one up. Your art has improved, that's alright.

Without meaning offense to Vanessa, you can see from the first issue to the latest comic that Vanessa's style has improved greatly.

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goddess-ofthe-night
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:18 pm  Reply with quote
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Mystic wrote:
What about finishing it and starting another one? Perhaps do like Randy and have 2 comics going at once? I don't see why you should rip one up. Your art has improved, that's alright.

Without meaning offense to Vanessa, you can see from the first issue to the latest comic that Vanessa's style has improved greatly.


yeah, Vanessa rather wants me to finish this one first before doing another story ^^;;;

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Foxonian
PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:59 pm  Reply with quote
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Well,what you could do is see how to "gradually" put changes into the existing story until it becomes something you are satisfied with.They can be very small changes like a new character or a slight adding to the plot.Personally,I like what you have done so far,but being ar write I have often felt less than happy with my earlier work(since one grows over time with added experience).
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henkcobra
PostPosted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:46 am  Reply with quote
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I saw your picture in the comic about zone.

You look so lovely, atractive and sexy.

Can I ask you to go out with me in a rp?

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LabrnMystic
PostPosted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:20 pm  Reply with quote
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goddess-ofthe-night wrote:
yeah, Vanessa rather wants me to finish this one first before doing another story ^^;;;


Well, what left would you do for this comic? Looks like the two were about to get physical, yes? So slap in some hot gal on gal scenes to get the men's attention, then add a "to be continued" after 10 pages of such action. Laughing

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MLock
PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:20 am  Reply with quote
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LabrnMystic wrote:
goddess-ofthe-night wrote:
yeah, Vanessa rather wants me to finish this one first before doing another story ^^;;;


Well, what left would you do for this comic? Looks like the two were about to get physical, yes? So slap in some hot gal on gal scenes to get the men's attention, then add a "to be continued" after 10 pages of such action. Laughing


now, that might be a good idea XP

keep up the good work =)

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Vanja
PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:40 am  Reply with quote
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Do what you feel comfortable with, to end the comic. I'm sure you will find out something really nice ^_^

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goddess-ofthe-night
PostPosted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:35 am  Reply with quote
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henkcobra wrote:
I saw your picture in the comic about zone.

You look so lovely, atractive and sexy.

Can I ask you to go out with me in a rp?


I don't RP i'm afraid ^^;;
No seriously XD

As for Labrn and Mlock

10 pages of lust? L O L Like I said GotN plays with girls but doesn't go far, but MAAAAAAAAAAAAYBE i'll make an exeption :p
or N O T

I don't know, i'm still thinking'

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